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Some people like doing work by hand . Others prefer using machines. Wich do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

It is the 21 centery and developed many kind of machines,for example , when people go to anything , people actually use car because of the time, for that he or she to save her or him time. People use machines all around of world because it is best way to do own work and machines have many kind of advantage. When people use machines , they can do clearly , perfectly and quikly.on the other hand if people do work by hand , its done more slowly than machines. That is the big reason of why people use machines. People have been using machines since 18 centery and they will be use machines. Now image to we do not use and have not machines that is too awful thing , if we do not have car , we should go anywhere by foot and if we don’t have plane , we can’t fly to foreign country , we may be swim in the sea to visit foreign country that is sounds like funny.so i use machines and I prefer use machines than do by hand.

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Some people like doing work by hand . Others prefer using machines. Wich do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

It is the 21 centery and developed many kind of machines,for example , when people go to anything , people actually use car because of the time, for that he or she to save her or him time. People use machines all around of world because it is best way to do own work and machines have many kind of advantage. When people use machines , they can do clearly , perfectly and quikly.on the other hand if people do work by hand , its done more slowly than machines. That is the big reason of why people use machines. People have been using machines since 18 centery and they will be use machines. Now image to we do not use and have not machines that is too awful thing , if we do not have car , we should go anywhere by foot and if we don’t have plane , we can’t fly to foreign country , we may be swim in the sea to visit foreign country that is sounds like funny.so i use machines and I prefer use machines than do by hand.

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Needyourshelp написал:PLS check my essay and fix them i hope you will do it :D

Some people like doing work by hand . Others prefer using machines. Wich do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

It is the 21 centery and developed many kind of machines,for example , when people go to anything , people actually use car because of the time, for that he or she to save her or him time. People use machines all around of world because it is best way to do own work and machines have many kind of advantage. When people use machines , they can do clearly , perfectly and quikly.on the other hand if people do work by hand , its done more slowly than machines. That is the big reason of why people use machines. People have been using machines since 18 centery and they will be use machines. Now image to we do not use and have not machines that is too awful thing , if we do not have car , we should go anywhere by foot and if we don’t have plane , we can’t fly to foreign country , we may be swim in the sea to visit foreign country that is sounds like funny.so i use machines and I prefer use machines than do by hand.

ayayay bi tiim ch sain bish tul aldaag chn nariin zaaj chadahgui ni. zugeer unshihad l evgui unshigdad bhin hehe

Gaigvi hvn baihgvimu ? harad ugchih ?

Needyourshelp написал:PLS check my essay and fix them i hope you will do it :D

Some people like doing work by hand . Others prefer using machines. Wich do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

It is the 21 centery and developed many kind of machines,for example , when people go to anything , people actually use car because of the time, for that he or she to save her or him time. People use machines all around of world because it is best way to do own work and machines have many kind of advantage. When people use machines , they can do clearly , perfectly and quikly.on the other hand if people do work by hand , its done more slowly than machines. That is the big reason of why people use machines. People have been using machines since 18 centery and they will be use machines. Now image to we do not use and have not machines that is too awful thing , if we do not have car , we should go anywhere by foot and if we don’t have plane , we can’t fly to foreign country , we may be swim in the sea to visit foreign country that is sounds like funny.so i use machines and I prefer use machines than do by hand.

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oguulberuud chen ehlel tugsgul ni medegdehgui, ugiin songolt muu bna!

Jijig sajig text, nom zohiol sain unsh. Tegvel oguulberiin butets zohion baiguulalt iig oilgono.

Dvrmiin aldaa, ugvvlber zvin aldaa ih bnaa, essay-d chin ali boloh neg vgiig olon davtahaas zailshiih yostoi shvde,

ystoi shuu dee. not , !

Hehe, za za, yostoi ni ch yu bhav, ghde l bichsen essaygee vnelvvlhin tuld neg yumaa davtaj bicheed hereggvi ee, hvmvvs teren deer l hamgiin ih shvvmjildiin

jishee n go to anything gehiin orond go to anywhere etr gesen n der blguidee
asuult chn doing WOrk by hand or using machines gesen bolhoor iish tiishee yvah talar yriad heregui yum shig, iish tiishee yvhad neh gar oroltsoh n haashaa yum, yvgan aylah durtai yu esul tekhnic heregsleer yvah durtai yu gegui bolhoor
because of time gecheed dahad to save their time geh shardlagagui bolvu,
him or her, he or she etr gej oguulbere urt bolgoh ch gediimu timerhu arga ashiglasnas iluu goy holboh ug etr ashiglaj surah heregtein bn lee
more slowly than gehgui slower than machines gdg bhaa mini angli hel bhgui bolsoon bolson kk
sain mergejliin huneer haruulaad oguulberiin nairuulga deeree anhaaraad, zohion bichleg hiigeed l bhaar n hurdan saijirdiin bn lee

өө чааваасаа засаж мэддэг хүн байдайггүймүү энд чинь ? эссэ ний талааар хэн ч мэднэ шдээ гол нь граммар нтр яг гол алдааг ни хараад өгөөч гэж байгаа болхоос биш ,
ЭГЭЛ ямар ч хэрэггүй юм бичих юмдаа ... , эсүүл яг таг тэгэж засаж шүүж мэддгүймүү ? тийм бол яхав2

Needyourshelp написал:өө чааваасаа засаж мэддэг хүн байдайггүймүү энд чинь ? эссэ ний талааар хэн ч мэднэ шдээ гол нь граммар нтр яг гол алдааг ни хараад өгөөч гэж байгаа болхоос биш ,
ЭГЭЛ ямар ч хэрэггүй юм бичих юмдаа ... , эсүүл яг таг тэгэж засаж шүүж мэддгүймүү ? тийм бол яхав2

zasay geheer dendvv ih aldaa bnaa hehe

barag google/translate hereglechuul bolhiin bishuu!

Needyourshelp написал:өө чааваасаа засаж мэддэг хүн байдайггүймүү энд чинь ? эссэ ний талааар хэн ч мэднэ шдээ гол нь граммар нтр яг гол алдааг ни хараад өгөөч гэж байгаа болхоос биш ,
ЭГЭЛ ямар ч хэрэггүй юм бичих юмдаа ... , эсүүл яг таг тэгэж засаж шүүж мэддгүймүү ? тийм бол яхав2

хүнээс юм гуйж байж сонин гар уу гүй юу хаха. Өөрөө граммераа уншаад ойлгоод засахгүй бол хэн л чиний өмнөөс чиний юмыг хийгээд сууж байхав дээ.

chicago-n ih surguuli yamarhu ve?

USA iin viznii yarilclagand orohdoo mongolior yarisan ni deer uu angliar yarisan ni deer uu? angli helendee tiim sn bish bolhoor yaahaa medehgu bnaa zarim humuus angliar hudlaa unen yarij chadahgu bsnaas mongolooroo yariad tend ochood surna gsn ni deer gd bhiin yaahuuu????

Uul n surguuliar xandaj bgaa bol angliar yarisan zgr bxaa. Elchingiin xun chamaas xerwee chi anu'd suraxaar yawax gj bga bol ygd angliar yarixgui bga yum be gwl yaxuu. Gexdee sn medexgui bnaaa

Needyourshelp написал:PLS check my essay and fix them i hope you will do it :D

Some people like doing work by hand . Others prefer using machines. Wich do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

It is the 21 centery and developed many kind of machines,for example , when people go to anything , people actually use car because of the time, for that he or she to save her or him time. People use machines all around of world because it is best way to do own work and machines have many kind of advantage. When people use machines , they can do clearly , perfectly and quikly.on the other hand if people do work by hand , its done more slowly than machines. That is the big reason of why people use machines. People have been using machines since 18 centery and they will be use machines. Now image to we do not use and have not machines that is too awful thing , if we do not have car , we should go anywhere by foot and if we don’t have plane , we can’t fly to foreign country , we may be swim in the sea to visit foreign country that is sounds like funny.so i use machines and I prefer use machines than do by hand.

НЭГ ӨГҮҮЛБЭРТ ОРСОН ХОЛБООС ӨГҮҮЛБЭР, ҮГИЙН ТОО ХЭТ ИХ БОЛООД ИРХЭЭР ТУХАЙН УНШИЖ БАЙГАА ХҮНД ОЙЛГОХОД ТӨВӨГТЭЙ САНАГДАЖ ЭХЭЛДЭГ ТИЙМЭЭС ЭХНИЙ ЭЭЛЖИНД НЭГ ӨГҮҮЛБЭРТ ХЭТ ИХ ХОЛБООС ӨГҮҮЛБЭР АВХААС ЗАЙЛС ХИЙХ ХЭРЭГТЭЙ МӨН ҮГИЙН БАЯЛАГ ИХТЭЙ БИЧИГДСЭН БАЙВАЛ ИХ САЙН, ДАРААГААР НЬ НЭГ ПАРАГРАФ(ДОГОЛ МӨРНӨӨС ЭХЛЭЖ БУЙ ХСЭС) ДЭЭР НЭГ Л УТГА САНАА АГУУЛСАН БАЙХ ЁСТОЙ ХЭРВЭЭ НЭГ ПАРАГРАФ ДЭЭР ОЛОН УТГА САНАА АГУУЛСАН БАЙХ ЮМ БОЛ ОЙЛГОХОД МӨН Л ТӨВӨГТЭЙ БОЛЖ ИРДЭГ!

Humuse bi americt ochihiug mash ih husej bn. Nuhur huuhedtgei. Shuud visa.d 3uulaa orwol yaah boloo? Nadad zuwluuch humuusee pls

yr n haan ch baisan ylgaagui ooroo l hicheeh heregtei gj boddiishd
Absolute-iin Tulga ged bagsh dajgui setgeleesee hunig ih shahdiim bn lee, tghdee odoo tend aijllahaa boliod tusdaa surgalt yvuuljaa gsn shuu, utas n 88077689 asuugaad uzku yu

passporto ugaalgin mashing ugagad hatachihsan yahu? viznii hamgiin door bdag bichgnii suulin 2,3n useg eswel too n alga bna busad n haragdajin, i94 n nileen myarchj, too n tod haragdjin

hi all bi ger buliin hamt amerik garah bodoltoi bn,hamgiin gol ni huuhdiinhee ireeduig tend tolovlood bg yum tegheer hamgiin gol naidvartai tuslaad gargaad ogogh hun bval tuslaach.

Сайнуу, ямартай ч нэг л юм захъя. Ирэх гэж байгаа хүмүүс Монголдоо чадахаасаа чадахгүйгээ хүртэл хэлний түвшингээ сайжруулсныхаа дараа ирвэл эдийн засаг, цаг хугацаанд үгүй мөн их хэмнэлттэй юм байна шүү.

USA high schoold scholarshipeer suraltsah bolomj bnuu humuusee
Tnxs

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